Comments on: PBeM: Terin Section 2 Part 1

By: twww

twww — Sun, 05 Oct 2008 14:56:36 +0000

Been a crazy week so I’m just getting around to reading this. As always, an excellent read.

My unposted comments should always be read as “That was great! Can’t wait for the next one!”.

As Euripedes said, repeating the same thing after every post would get old quickly, but that is what I think after each new installment :)

By: Mosshoof

Mosshoof — Sun, 05 Oct 2008 02:36:08 +0000

As always, your story is well-written, and I continue to enjoy the tale. Now, what can we do to *speed you up*?

By: Euripedes

Euripedes — Sat, 04 Oct 2008 14:48:50 +0000

There are plenty of us out here who enjoy excellent fiction.

I think the majority of us who are reading this simply have no idea how, or what, to comment on.

I’m sure things like “Oh my!” and “That was awesome!” or “Whatserface sounds friendly” get really old quite rapidly.

Although with this, I do have to comment.

The “why does this room smell so strongly of wet dog” had me laughing for a good ten minutes. GOOD LORD, that was funny.

By: Landorien

Landorien — Sat, 04 Oct 2008 03:26:17 +0000

huh, well that’s a twist I didn’t expect!

Great stuff, looking forward to the next :)

By: Alcodis

Alcodis — Fri, 03 Oct 2008 21:39:37 +0000

Good Stuff, I am going to have to find the first section on this

By: bigbearbutt

bigbearbutt — Fri, 03 Oct 2008 20:57:20 +0000

I know Manny… I knew it was going to take a little bit of build up to get James into the setting enough that he’d have something to work with once the story got rolling, but this was ridiculous.

I don’t even want to think of how far into the story we are before the actual ‘dun dun dun’ begins.

By: bigbearbutt

bigbearbutt — Fri, 03 Oct 2008 20:55:57 +0000

You know Hulan, I want to thank you for your encouragement.

These posts get so few comments, and considering the effort that goes into them, it is so rewarding to know that you enjoy them.

It’s funny, but I really do treasure your comments and kindness about this storyline, because unlike the other writing I do here, this is writing I’m doing about my own creative ideas, in confunction with Manny and James, and not just me writing about someone else’s story. It makes a big difference to me that someone likes it.

So thanks again!

By: Mannyac

Mannyac — Fri, 03 Oct 2008 16:42:47 +0000

Very nicely written, I enjoyed the read. Though I know my time is coming again, it’s nice to see someone else at the “wtf?!?” point in a turn.

He he

By: Melpo

Melpo — Fri, 03 Oct 2008 15:56:55 +0000

oh lordy. This is going to be interesting. Now to figure out what to do :)

By: Hulan

Hulan — Fri, 03 Oct 2008 05:18:25 +0000

Great stuff! I’m looking forward to the rest :)