Comments on: Terin: Section 7 Chapter 5

By: James

James — Wed, 23 Feb 2011 00:33:30 +0000

ooo…I’ve been hoping to get more on him…I’m not sure what to make yet of a talking dog :)

By: bigbearbutt

bigbearbutt — Tue, 22 Feb 2011 22:24:01 +0000

What I’m actually going to try and do is write shorter sections of the story, about this length, but a lot more often, maybe three or more a week. I really want to build some momentum, have the story start rolling along. It’s when the turns get delayed by a week that i drop out of whats going on, and it’s hard to ick it back up.

Now, I’m finally home and sitting down, I’m going to begin writing the next chapter right now. Time to find out a lot more about Redwulf.

By: caliokiegirl

caliokiegirl — Tue, 22 Feb 2011 20:42:01 +0000

Great read, and like everyone else I look forward to reading more. We Night Elves just have one question, “Don’t you humans have enough enemies? Why do you create discourse amongst yourselves when there are enemies all around you?” Just another reason there will never be a Human Druid. /LOL. I hope you continue to weave your tale. I look forward to reading it.

By: bigbearbutt

bigbearbutt — Tue, 22 Feb 2011 12:32:39 +0000

I do understand, it was a very short one. I know James probably thought the description of the fight would take longer when he gave me his turn… but I think it turned outexactly right, given the character and capabilities of Terin.

I know most books would devote several pages to a fight, but this was the first time you actually saw Terin in any kind of fight, and I wanted to make damn sure I set the tone properly for all the future battles that may come.

I’m intending to keep writing, I know what James wanted to do next, but I also wanted to get this out as it was done before continuing.

By: Tsudrats

Tsudrats — Tue, 22 Feb 2011 08:19:39 +0000

Okay … so write just enough to completely pull us in and leave us wanting to turn the page only to sign off … as Cozy said … Thank you for sharing with us :)

By: Cozy

Cozy — Tue, 22 Feb 2011 06:54:45 +0000

*sigh* Finished.

And without wanting to sound critical, all I can think of is, “too short”. I want to know what happens next, darn it! I’m really enjoying it, and I suspect being drip-fed is good for my patience ;-)

Again, thank you to you, James and Manny for letting us share in this with you – now, if it not impolite, and if and when you have time, obviously, can we have more, please?

Best wishes!