Comments on: PBeM: Terin Section 7 Chapter 7

By: Cozy

Cozy — Tue, 19 Apr 2011 17:06:14 +0000

More please?

By: Roseqwartz

Roseqwartz — Sat, 16 Apr 2011 16:05:00 +0000

Giddy like a little school girl. the visuals are stunning, or maybe just the way i’m seeing them, but still.

By: Finwe

Finwe — Fri, 15 Apr 2011 16:26:35 +0000

I think you nailed the triple crit. That gives so much information and background on the world, and it provides knowlegde for how to move on, but it doesn’t break the story. Nice job.

By: bigbearbutt

bigbearbutt — Fri, 15 Apr 2011 14:01:27 +0000

That’s actually something that’s been the biggest challenge for me; to have gone public and do both stories, knowing that each of you needs to feel that you’ve got a clear idea where YOU’RE going, without ruining your story by seeing what the other person is heading into.

We’re rapidly reaching the point where I’m going to have to write two turns back to back, the last one for Terin in his section and the first one for Jessie to begin her next section, and release them both at the same time because the one will be an ‘oh shit’ moment for the other.

By: Mannyac

Mannyac — Fri, 15 Apr 2011 13:45:28 +0000

Very cool, I liked it.
I especially liked the fact that after reading it, I didn’t have a bunch of “oh damn I can’t know that in character” moments.

By: bigbearbutt

bigbearbutt — Fri, 15 Apr 2011 01:22:50 +0000

I always look forward to seeing if you liked it. The day I lose twww as a reader, is the day the music dies.

By: twww

twww — Fri, 15 Apr 2011 01:13:46 +0000

yay! I almost feel sorry for the wizards…..